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Bee playing tennisMark Smith won the first prize at last night's music competition. He played four pieces by Chopin on the new piano. We have the committee to thank for the purchase of this fine instrument, which will be very welcome in the coming season.

This is a bad example.

The first two sentences have a logical connection.

However, the third sentence changes to a different topic.

[The 'link' is the piano, but the subject should be Mark Smith.]

The final clause changes the topic even further.

 

 
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