Three
features make this a beautiful picture. The subject is treated
in a technically original manner. The artist has used traditional
materials in a way which displays true craftmanship. Most importantly
however, the arrangement of details reveals an underlying structure
which gives coherence to the whole. It is rare to find such talent
in someone so young.
This is a good example.
The paragraph topic [three features] is announced in the first
sentence.
Subsequent sentences describe these three features.
The paragraph ends with a statement which leads to the next topic.
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