Sample Body Paragraph One
My participation in group work has been an
interesting experience, and has benefited me as a student. (topic
sentence, given by teacher)
When I worked with my classmates on the definition of the word, “freedom,”
I felt very dissatisfied with my group. One person spoke too much, and so
I didn’t have enough time to speak by myself. This made that group a
poor one for me that day. (Example one: on my feelings in the group)
However, another time, we worked together on poetry. This time, the
group members helped me to understand the term rhyme better than before.
One of them was very good with sound, so helped all of us understand. (Example
two: using group brainpower)
So, my experiences in the group were interesting and sometimes
benefited me, but not always. (concluding both of my examples; positive
and negative in my case)
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